Nov. 1 White Space
Hi everyone. Boy, this place is hopping. Wonderful to see all of you! This idea -- something I want to explore further -- came to me in the middle of the workday, so am posting earlier than expected....
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oh, good. I'm enjoying the reading today. very taut! sharp and pointed, like a witches's hat what foods these morsels be.
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Nice near rhymes and rhymes. I like the premise and the way this "sounds" and feels.
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I like this a lot, and can only agree. Nice 'accidental' rhyme at the end.
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I liked this. Would I like it if it were white noise? Probably not. [that's my idea of a funny joke] [sorry] Great close. Intriguing S2.
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Very sharp and focused! Ditto to all above I particularly like, "memory trace" followed by "place".
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I feel like I'm back in the class room teaching design. Now kids, let me tell you about the importance of white space. I wish I had your poem back then to read them.
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Wonderful, deep, skilled, surprising. So Toni! So glad so many of our old friends are here! What about Chrispy?
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Love it, Toni. For all the qualities mentioned above. So on and polished. johanna
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The ending was my favorite part of this. A gem. (And yes, Greta - it would be so great if Chrispy could join us. Wonder where she is.)
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Hi Toni! Well here we are - I'm excited!Love this, the idea of negative space and what it implies, the weight it carries, the secrets it can reveal - and it's white and ghostly - a seasonal...
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